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My World Is Falling Apart
Contributed by
MrPerfect
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Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 01:50:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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My World Is Falling Apart
I sit and watch it crumble
I've tried
I've tried harder than anyone ever has
I had it so good I never saw it coming
As I look back now
I see all the times I should'a known
that it was gonna happen
It's not just the breakup
it's everything
I had it so good
and now looking back
I noticed
how frantically hard I tried to make it not happen
but it was inevitable
I noticed that trying that hard only made it worse
so now all I can do is sit and watch
Of course I can try
but there's a time and a place for everything
I suppose all I can do is keep my faith
that's really all I can do
Some of you reading this may be thinking
"Is he crazy?
"that's Irrational"
You may be right
maybe it is Crazy and Irrational
but that's my last Choice
it's worked before
So trust me
some of you may have heard this before
Because all I can do is
Trust and keep Faith
Copyright ©
MrPerfect
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2006-05-29 13:50:11]
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Re: My World Is Falling Apart
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by MarLites on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 03:56:32 PM AEST
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I can relate and It's not irrational. That is why we write.
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Re: My World Is Falling Apart
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 11:03:31 AM AEST
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I can relate as well.. I liked this poem.. It was well written and very well expressed..
Take care
christina |
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Re: My World Is Falling Apart
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:22:56 AM AEST
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Re: My World Is Falling Apart
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by -xhaleyx- on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:42:47 PM AEST
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in every poem, i put " VERY WELL DONE" because it always is! You have a talent in expressing how you feel. And no its not irrational. Its something we all go through. Hurt is what makes things better...because you know not to do the same things. Whatever doesnt kill you, will make you stronger. And you are already strong, so hang in there...you'll pull out just fine.
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