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Betrayal
Contributed by
jujubee21
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Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:49:40 AM in AEST
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I guess I'm not good enough for you.
You betrayed a love that was so true.
I've never layed eyes on anyone else.
All you think of is your freaking self.
I'm tired of all your little games.
I don't want to hear another girl's name.
I don't want to blame myself anymore.
It's either me or your little whore.
I'm not going to live my life this way.
When I question you never have much to say.
You need to grow up and open your eyes.
Without any trust love only dies.
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2006-05-29 08:49:40]
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Re: Betrayal
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by chaos78 on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:48:22 AM AEST
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| u are so right without trust love can only die good write |
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Re: Betrayal
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 06:24:00 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Hang tuff.
Keep the faith and move on.
luv, huggs,
emy` |
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Re: Betrayal
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 07:09:24 PM AEST
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Wow! This was anger well expressed in "let's not mince words" fashion coherently laid out in beautiful rhyme and a meter 'n' syntax that made it flow with fed up 'bout waitin' for some growin' up! Very good and enjoyable write!
wabl
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Re: Betrayal
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:15:33 AM AEST
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you are so right about the value of trust and love
kc
amazing write
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Re: Betrayal
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 09:20:26 AM AEST
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Strong feelings, true message. Still, I shake my head when good-hearted girls still try and bargain with loser guys (eg its her or me-you know, the one you married and have 4 kids with?). I guess its part of the female psyche, but I thinks its a socialised trait. That aside, men also hate hearing their girl talk about other guys.Now, that's primal.
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Re: Betrayal
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
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I am glad that you realize that you don't have to take anyone else's crap.. Whatever makes you happy you should do.. Powerful emotion.. Great poem..
Take care
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Re: Betrayal
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by texasw97 on
Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 05:00:02 PM AEST
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| This was aight..You have better ones..But I feel you on just getting this off your chest. Take care |
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