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Scene
Contributed by
light_switch
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Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 06:52:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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These feelings lay restless on the bathroom floor
Alongside my lifeless body and equally dead dreams
As the blood gently caresses my face
And the blade sparkles in the flashing lights
Cast down by the police cars parked only meters away
I mean nothing to them I’m only a number
Yet I mean more to them than I did to myself
Not to mention how little I meant to you.
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2006-05-29 06:52:03]
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Re: Scene
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 11:04:16 AM AEST
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beautiful. painfully emotional and honest. i love this...
- Bethani -
"Yet I mean more to them than I did to myself
Not to mention how little I meant to you." ---wonderful line(s) |
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Re: Scene
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by deadclown on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:55:11 AM AEST
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| jus read the love poem one so I thought i'd check more of your work.good stuff.like to see more |
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