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livin to die
Contributed by
chaos78
on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 01:01:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Surround by darkness
blinded from no light
praying for my death
now that can’t be right
been living in my own
hell each night
misery need company
what up with dat
I am alone drowning
in my own sorrow for
I hope there shell
be no tomorrow
for the pain is just
to much to bear
and
I have lost
all my cares
for the scar just won’t
heal it is all I feel
so what am I to do
I prayed but
got no answer from you
so there only one
thing left that I can do
I’ll let the knife tell the
rest
maybe then my soul
can rest because I see
no point in fighting
to live
when I’m just living
to die
why should I try
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chaos78
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2006-05-29 01:01:38]
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Re: livin to die
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 02:08:28 AM AEST
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Very sad but briliantly written.
there's always hope as long as there's breathe in the body.
It takes much more strength live than it does to die.
Hope u feel better soon.
huggs, prayer,
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Re: livin to die
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by mali on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 02:20:12 AM AEST
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Hay, I know how u feel and I hope your OK. just maybe try and look at the good things in life
Mali |
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