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Don't Care
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 10:23:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I follow you,
My angel, My savior,
You were everything I knew,
Put all my trust in you,
To be everything you want.
I don't care,
Anymore,
I can't be,
Everything,
You want me to fake,
Anything,
Just to get away,
From,
Who I really am,
Inside,
I'm dying and I,
Don't care.
Always, I was here for you,
I kept your life so perfect,
What more do you want me to do?
My heart you dissect,
Tearing me apart.
I don't care,
Anymore,
I can't be,
Everything,
You want me to fake,
Anything,
Just to get away,
From,
Who I really am,
Inside,
I'm dying and I,
Don't care.
Being someone else,
Trying to be flawless,
They still looked at me,
Like I couldn't be,
The image they want, hopeless.
I don't care,
Anymore,
I can't be,
Everything,
You want me to fake,
Anything,
Just to get away,
From,
Who I really am,
Inside,
I'm dying and I,
Don't care.
Endless hallways,
Pointless faces,
It's worse through the days,
My mouth sewed shut with laces,
You were never there,
But I don't care.
You spat in my face,
You watched me fall,
You left me with disgrace,
You saw it all,
You don't care.
I don't want this,
Anymore,
I'm done trying,
Everything,
I don't want you to do,
Anything,
Just get away,
From,
What's left of me,
I'm different from you but,
I don't care.
Don't care. (I don't)
Anymore. (Can't be)
To fake. (Everything)
Get away. (I don't want it)
Really am. (Inside)
I'm dying. (And I)
Don't care (What)
Don't care (You)
Don't care (Want)
...I just don't care...
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2006-05-28 22:23:42]
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Re: Don't Care
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by wizard on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 10:29:12 PM AEST
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nicely done...i enjoyed this...might i suggest though, that the use of so many commas may not be necessary? just my humble opinion.
i really like the format and message in this write.
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Re: Don't Care
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by chaos78 on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 10:41:50 PM AEST
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| i know how u feel u pretend not to care but u really do any way i like the write |
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Re: Don't Care
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 10:52:04 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry that u r so angry.
It's o.k. to get angry even with God.
Still go back and read what u wrote and maybe u can see where the problem is.
the title says it.
We should never fake who we are.
God is luv and that's all I need to know.
Hang in there.
Hope u find faith again.
It's not what we do or don't do it's what inside that God looks at.
I hope you're not phycically dieing, spitirtually ether but u know what I mean.
Just remember it's the heart what God is luving.
Hang tuff and if u need a friend. p.m. me any time.
Awesome writing.
huggs, prayer,
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Re: Don't Care
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by spider on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:15:02 AM AEST
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really like the repeated bit.
if this isn't a song already it should be |
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Re: Don't Care
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by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 02:16:51 PM AEST
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| I agree with spider. This should be a song if it isn't already! And you were right, it does have the same meaning as mine! Good job! |
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