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End of My Misery
Contributed by
lilbabe
on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:08:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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And I die in pain,
An act of mercy, I think
As my blood drains
Out of this body
I never feel queasy
Watching it flow in narrow rivers
Dying is easy,
And living is the hardest part
The grip of death is tight,
So I shall never return
Suicide is not right
But I can't just stop
There's a series of scars along my arms
Now I have one along my neck
My collection of self-inflicted harm
It won't be long until
The cut skimming my neck
Kills me by my own free will
Bringing this misery to an end
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lilbabe
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2006-05-28 09:08:17]
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Re: End of My Misery
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 11:59:33 PM AEST
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suicide. so horrible...
i like the poem...it's painful, but well-written
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Re: End of My Misery
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by spider on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:17:07 AM AEST
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my favourite part:
''Watching it flow in narrow rivers
Dying is easy,''
really like everything about this poem, the structure, the words, the content just...everything :) tis really really good. |
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