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YELL AT ME
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:12:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Just yell at me
it's not like I care
I can't be perfect
because life isn't fair
I'll collapse in pain
lying on the ground
you'll whip because I seem so proud
I almost look forward to the beating I'll get
maybe I'll cry
and you will regret
but I had to expect this
as blood's shed on the floor
now that I'm dead
it won't hurt anymore.
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Re: YELL AT ME
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:22:16 PM AEST
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| And it's sad that situations like this seem to increase. The world should appreciate people like yourself who make us aware that this is a growing problem. Your words go straight to the heart. |
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Re: YELL AT ME
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by zeequeen on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 04:36:02 PM AEST
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wow.
So disturbing but true.
I hope this isn't a poem written from experience. |
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Re: YELL AT ME
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by ham323 on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:17:44 PM AEST
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| Er.. Good poem. But sad. |
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Re: YELL AT ME
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by spider on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:41:21 AM AEST
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bloody hell.
i like poems like that. the ones that are over quickly but leave you feeling completely different.
thats really damn good. |
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