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*~So Far Gone~*
Contributed by
djdarkrose04
on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:31:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Hurdling my car down a back country road...
Tears are streaming down my face...
My mind is gone...
So far gone...
Too many times I was smacked in the face...
Too many times I was kicked in the gut...
My mind is gone...
So far gone...
My heart has been ripped from my chest...
Placed on the sidewalk and stomped to bits...
My mind is gone...
So far gone...
Sliding around corners...
Vearing in and out of lanes...
My mind is gone...
So far gone...
I see a bridge in the distance...
A chance for escape...
My mind is gone...
So far gone...
I gun the accelerator...
Racing to the bridge...
My mind is gone...
So far gone...
But I never hit the bridge...
The careens off the guardrail...
My mind is gone...
So far gone...
Plunging into the creek below...
The car sticks on a patch of rocks...
My mind is gone...
So far gone...
I walked away without a scratch...
I shouldn't be alive...
I should be gone...
So far gone...
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djdarkrose04
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2006-05-27 09:31:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: *~So Far Gone~*
(User Rating: 1 ) by suesmuse1 on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:41:32 AM AEST (User
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Maybe you should learn from this.... Life is so precious, every day is a new day! Leave the past behind! Take care |
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Re: *~So Far Gone~*
(User Rating: 1 ) by MarLites on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:41:50 AM AEST (User
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Great poem although the subject is not one of my favorites. That is why I write
Mary |
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Re: *~So Far Gone~*
(User Rating: 1 ) by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:39:34 AM AEST (User
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hey whenever u get these felings just write a poem..just write any poem..take care b happy bye |
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