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Slow it Down

Contributed by Shmokin on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:13:04 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Slow it Down

Self destruct, finger on the button and push
A million different ways to destroy through self abuse

Fill your lungs with toxins
Or shove them in your veins
Pour them in your gullet
Or any orifice that remains

Live life in the fast lane
Or slow slow slowing it down
Fill gaps and gaping holes
And slow slow slowing it down

Self destruct, self abuse, self destroy
Looking for Nirvana
Just slow slow slow it down

Discard the bothers of this world
To your own place of beauty go
Move out of the fast lane
Slow slow take it slow

Feeling mellow, safe and warm
Reach that plateau divine
Can you just stay there?
Stop time
And wrapped in mellow calmness
You sit cosy warm stress free
Suddenly it strikes you, is this the way it’s meant to be?
Speed up, speed up, get moving again
Your must run to make your mark
Speed, haste, a kick up the arse
No self-realisation if on your bum you park

Park it, shove it, kick it or kiss
Just get it moving or it’s your life you’ll miss
Park it, shove it, kick it or kiss
Just get it moving or it’s your life you’ll miss

Back out on the fast lane
Running in the race
Striding out
Aiming for first place
To make your mark
To make your mark
Running out in the race
To make your mark

Run, run, run, how long must you run
Sit down to rest and you’re doomed
Run, run, run, how long must you run
Success must be your food

But you gotta slow slow slow it down to see it
You gotta slow slow slow it down to feel
Slow slow it to appreciate
Food is more than just a meal
Speed up for the doing
Slow down to reflect
Finding an even balance
Cause and effect
Cause and effect

XShmokinX




Copyright © Shmokin ... [ 2006-05-27 05:13:04]
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Re: Slow it Down (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:33:08 AM AEST
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Nice write. The flow was kinda choppy, then stabilized in the end. Then again, that does kinda go along with the poem well.


Re: Slow it Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 08:08:51 AM AEST
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Great message, variable but effective delivery, witha song-like quality to parts of it.
Speed up for the doing
Slow down to reflect
Finding an even balance
Cause and effect
Cause and effect


Great finish -couldn't have written it better myself!

Spike


Re: Slow it Down (User Rating: 1 )
by djdarkrose04 on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:22:34 AM AEST
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I agree with Spike on my fave part of this poem. Great write! I can't wait to read more.


Re: Slow it Down (User Rating: 1 )
by monkeylove on Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 09:33:52 AM AEST
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wow this is very deep...i can feel the pain and struggle of the meaning...you have a lot of emotions




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