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depressed and alone
Contributed by
Ashleigh4
on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Should you walk away
and separate the day
from the nightmares, the cold,
hide beneath the blanket fold.
and listen to my silent screams,
as i realise nightmares aren't my dreams.
i cry, i die, i scream, i sigh,
i cut, i live, i crawl, i leave.
whimpering, alone and cold,
i long for pain, and tears of gold
that shelter from the storm of life,
the eye of the storm- the glint of the knife.
the scars of wreckage, haunt my soul,
a battered, cut-up, living doll.
please play with me, don't mind my tear.
all is well-ignore my fear.
Copyright ©
Ashleigh4
... [
2003-02-07 00:00:00]
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Re: depressed and alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 08:23:59 AM AEST
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| Nah, this isn't crap - it's actually pretty good. Give yourself some credit ! :) |
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Re: depressed and alone
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by roisin on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:13:12 AM AEST
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a good write...nice flow to your words...sad tho'
ta for sharing
rosie |
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Re: depressed and alone
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by M on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:39:24 AM AEST
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no, this is really good, i like the rhyme, its really good, i really like
'and listen to my silent screams,
as i realise nightmares aren't my dreams.'
keep it up Ashleigh, MxXx
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Re: depressed and alone
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 08:59:19 PM AEST
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This was very good I loved it. I loved the rhyming and the flow of it. Thnx for posting this. I love all your stuff.
Your friend,
Joel |
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