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Renewal

Contributed by Nazmythian on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:30:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry







( Don't tell her I Nazzifified it, Weeeeeeeeeeee !!!)




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Re: Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:45:04 AM AEST
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Exquisitely beautiful you two. In every way-
straight from the perfect title to the flawless verses that
captured an emotion of the heart in sweet rapture.

renewal . . . somehow I know this word intimately.
It's an amazing feeling to be renewed.

Your words hold warmth, passion, and a certain
soft forgiveness in them. A lovely write from two whom
have always offered me much affection and support.

Inspiring this was. And wonderfully uplifting.


*love and squeezies to you both*
~Breezy



Re: Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:48:04 AM AEST
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Awesome, you two! I was smiling at the wonderful thing called love. Hard as hell sometimes, but always worth fighting for. The picture was awesome....the tree in it's "rebirth". Cut it down....it will grow back. Wonderful symbolism. Peace and hugs to you both, Laura


Re: Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 02:13:59 AM AEST
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The whole production..

mindblowing! absolutely loved it.

J.


Re: Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 11:32:28 AM AEST
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You know what, you two? This is really lovely to see.

It is a complete smile inducer. You two are stronger than you think and there is a lot of love there. It shows in this write.

Be strong, and write more soon, Ok?

Thinking about it, shouldn't there have been a collab between you two sooner? ;)

Lots of love to both of you,
Phyllis xxx


Re: Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 07:00:53 PM AEST
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A cooperative work of art, with a wonderful flow and loving and romantic theme. I really like the tenderness and spiritality inherent in this lovely poem.

You did yourselves proud, well done and a great joint effert.

Will/Terry


Re: Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:24:16 PM AEST
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lol, nice end note after the poem :P

I really enjoyed this one. The changing repetition of each end line, and the choice of words was really great. I especially liked what the last stanza evoked, with "endless tears" that are drying, that's a great idea right there, and there's a sense of originality to it all. Great stuff.

The picture added to the ambiance, I thought.




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