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My knife
Contributed by
KarlaMarie
on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 11:52:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Your last touch
Around my neck
I saw the darkness
The beginning of death
I began to slip away
Must fight against your need
I grasp to first thing within my reach
One thrust - you begin to bleed
No longer my master
No longer your slave
This loving piece of sliver
My life has been saved
My white dress, red
Tainted with our blood, your gin
Kneeling above your dying flesh
Repeatedly piercing beneath the skin
You are dead
No more rape nor pain
Relief washes over me
I whisper your name
Love, I say, your dead
Tonight I say my farewells
I killed you; your blood stains my breast
I will see you in hell.
KarlaMarie
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KarlaMarie
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2006-05-26 23:52:28]
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Re: My knife
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by AshRayne on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:27:10 PM AEST
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for your first fighting back poem, i say congratulations.
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Re: My knife
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 05:20:42 AM AEST
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light, but dark, i loved it, sounded a little like something i wrote (like "your own apocolypse" maybe), or might have written (if i tried very hard of course =D). like i said, great write though.
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Re: My knife
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by Lilbabe on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 06:43:38 AM AEST
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wow...that's good. the words were arranged just right to create a powerful poem. good write,
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