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My Gift To You
Contributed by
coolkid7098
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Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 10:50:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Do you remember
When I first gave
My greatest Treasure to you?
That dusty, unused vase with
Eccentric hearts carved around?
I don’t Remember that day.
The day I remember most
Is when you
Shattered my gift to you
Along with my heart.
Then came the day after
When you came to my doorstep
Glue in hand;
But I would rather remember
How things were
At their best
Than to mend it and
See the cracks
Left for eternity.
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2006-05-26 10:50:04]
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Re: My Gift To You
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 11:20:48 AM AEST
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This poem is a reminder that there are things we would rather not remember. I do like the intent of reconciliation (glue = willingness to put it all back together again=love.)
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Re: My Gift To You
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by ever1der on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 01:02:23 PM AEST
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| this almost made me cry ... sometimes sorries just come to late. |
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Re: My Gift To You
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by mrpeanut64 on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 02:18:02 PM AEST
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| But remember sometimes that which is broken grows back stronger for the break. Without pain how would we recognize pleasure |
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