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WAS SCREAMIN
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emystar
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Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:43:04 AM in AEST
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Yo luv isn't real
"cause You can't feel.
Been there before.
ain't sleepin round, no mo!
He say you so tuff.
Was screamin, God, please
don;t let me get aides,
Oh god! My soul's rage
Was scremin ,
Please God, no aides!
He was sleepin round see
he didn't care 'bout me.
Oh yeah he confessed
God revealed the rest.
So many times dear fatha
We stumble-n-bobble.
Stay there if ya want.
Your nite marees will haunt.
Tuffness, hell it ain't me
Tis God's luv, my pilot, see?
Leaving you with forgiveness.
ln God be blessed.
In Jesus name, amen!
...The Promise...
SultryRose's Signatures
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emystar
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2006-05-26 07:43:04]
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:55:05 AM AEST
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It will make a nice RAP, nicely done.
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 05:43:23 PM AEST
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Wow i am impress with this song .
great job on this.
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 09:51:37 PM AEST
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A very lovely and most well crafted song emy
lots of passion behind the lyrics. Nicely done
my friend.
((((emystar))))
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN
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by JGB on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 03:20:23 AM AEST
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I may not be into rap, but I Love this em!!!
LOL!!! I FEEL YOU!!!!
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 11:26:15 PM AEST
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These are some really nice lyrics you have written. I enjoyed reading, and it was fun to read the words in the way you wrote them.
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem as well. My first reader, yahoooooo...and my new found friend.
Pepper
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:10:24 AM AEST
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Great work Emy~..and how nobel.. your forgiveness-
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:20:53 AM AEST
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Amazing write, Emy.... was almost singing while reading it...
Hugs
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:19:33 AM AEST
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Incredible Emy. This piece, and your heart.
Wonderfully penned lyrics. [I heard a funky beat whilst reading . .. lol]
*hugs*
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