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Keep it
Contributed by
franko
on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Keep it comming sugar,
Keep the freshness locked in
With your vapour sealed insides
Your vacuum packed asides
Keep it hot girl,
Keep your secrets locked in tight
With your tabloid titillation
With your lack of inhabitations
Keep it stupid, simple.
Keep this culture going
With this lack of actual thought.
With the Mercedes you just bought
Keep it all in line.
Neat and side by side, X and Y
With the answer on the line
Just sign the dotted line.
Copyright ©
franko
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2006-05-26 07:30:00]
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Re: Keep it
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:49:06 AM AEST
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Huhuh, I heah ya.
Very good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Keep it
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:51:39 AM AEST
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The poet here has expressed the emotions and frustration very beautifully, we could sense the cooker hot and steaming.
FRANCO
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Re: Keep it
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 08:09:34 AM AEST
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Nope, No Emotions here, LOL
sadaddy
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Re: Keep it
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by wizard on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 08:11:01 AM AEST
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interesting write.
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Re: Keep it
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 09:49:36 AM AEST
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No emotions, no passions,- folks without them are deprived of what nourishes the soul for growth. hey suffer "Atrophy" Pity them!
Beautifully and very aptly brought to the fore in this excellent poem.
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Re: Keep it
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by ever1der on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 02:54:11 PM AEST
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| "keep this culture going"...I liked this line..it says a lot. |
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Re: Keep it
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by seci on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 04:48:29 PM AEST
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| i really like this because it is diffrent. i really really do. |
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