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my scars
Contributed by
firearchdruid
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Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 12:17:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Scripted thoughts in a nonlinear head
All the things that make you wish you were dead
afraid to live never venturing too far in life
wasting away years only getting strife
wanting to die feeling the anger begin to rise
ears turn deaf to ever wondering lies
pitch the dirt throw me in the hole
tear open the scars and take my soul
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Re: my scars
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 06:42:08 AM AEST
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dark, anguished, fantastically written. "tear open the scars and take my soul" love the orignality.
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Re: my scars
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 05:51:13 PM AEST
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What a awsome dark poem i love this.
Thanks for sharing |
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Re: my scars
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by AshRayne on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:38:51 PM AEST
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your rhyme works well for this peice. interesting poem
~Ash |
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