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Imperfect Perfection
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
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Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 11:58:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She’s not the most beautiful girl ever seen
No Helen of Troy to make the gods green
But there’s something about her I simply can’t place
Not the color of her hair or the shape of her face
Her legs a bit short, her eyes a touch wide
No voice of an angel, her walk does not glide
No vision of Venus when at her I gaze
But just her mere sight and I’m in a daze
No she may not be a figure of grace
But perfection she is when we embrace
Imperfect perfection, as pure as a dove
As seen though my eyes clouded by love
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Re: Imperfect Perfection
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by _unknown_ on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 12:06:29 AM AEST
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| i doo much like!! |
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Re: Imperfect Perfection
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 11:06:28 AM AEST
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Andrew Marvell would be proud of you for this one. I think it is in "To His Coy Mistress" where he adresses his mistress in a similar way:
An hundred years should go to praise
Thine eyes and on thy forehead gaze;
Two hundred to adore each breast;
But thirty thousand to the rest;
An age at least to every part,
And the last age should show your heart;
For, Lady, you deserve this state,
Nor would I love at lower rate.
Beautiful write!
Butch
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Re: Imperfect Perfection
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by ButchCorpuz on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 12:47:58 PM AEST
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In love... it's not how perfect you see imperfections...
But... how those imperfections make you see the perfection...
Perfectly...
Very nice poem. Keep writing.
-Butch
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Re: Imperfect Perfection
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 06:01:17 PM AEST
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| Beauty is only skin deep, but beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. You sum it up perfectly, looks aren't everything.You see beyond it in this poem. Sue xx |
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Re: Imperfect Perfection
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:28:54 AM AEST
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Awww... This is such a beautiful poem.. I really liked this alot.. It was written brillantly!!
Take care
christina |
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Re: Imperfect Perfection
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by constantlyme on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 06:59:55 PM AEST
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Beautifully written and expressed. I like to think its such imperfections that make us all unique and beautiful. loved it.
-Danielle |
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