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Oh my son
Contributed by
D-Day
on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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"Oh my son,
my dear sweet son,
where hast thou been,
for such many a night."
"I have been out mother,
out and around the town.
Now sleep mother,
sleep your deep, deep slumber."
"Oh my son,
my dear sweet son,
what hast thou done,
for such many a night."
"I have been searching mother,
searching for the monster.
Now sleep mother,
sleep you deep, deep slumber."
"Oh my son,
my dear sweet son,
why hast thou been searching,
for such many a night."
"For revenge mother,
revenge on those who caused this pain.
Now sleep mother,
sleep your deep, deep slumber."
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D-Day
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2003-02-06 22:40:00]
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Re: Oh my son
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 04:42:15 PM AEST
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very nice poem. Mysterious but nice. Very well written and I think many people search for those that have caused them personal pain yet they never talk about it
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Re: Oh my son
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by Chezzy on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 10:08:56 PM AEST
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Hello fancyface,
I thought your poem was extremely thought provoking and intense. I enjoyed reading it.
regards,
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Re: Oh my son
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by Chezzy on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 10:11:21 PM AEST
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My sincere appologies D-day,
I looked at the wrong name and called you fancyface. Once again I'm sorry.
chezzy. (the red faced one) |
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