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This Is What I Am
Contributed by
Alineko
on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 09:11:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Help me, I can't breath
My feelings cancel out everything that’s me
Lost in agony
A world of perpetual reality
Blood no longer sustaining me
Teach me not to feel
Teach me not to care
Save me from my misery
Save me from my hell
I cry out to the silence
But silence only ignores me
Yet it's all that can hear me
No one I can trust
No one I can tell
No one who can hear
The way I really feel
Take my life
Stick it in a can
Shake it all up
This is what I am.
Copyright ©
Alineko
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2006-05-25 21:11:04]
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Re: This Is What I Am
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by xxTiaxx on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 09:36:30 PM AEST
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| This was pretty cool... I especially appreciated the last line. |
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Re: This Is What I Am
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by Caged Soul on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 01:50:31 AM AEST
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I think that theoverall structure and flow of this piece was done in a very clever way. As for the content, I can relate to this feeling more than I care to admit. Great one
Keep it up
Ash~ |
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