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A Quick, Not Quite Painless Death
Contributed by
lilbabe
on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 06:54:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Overlooking the edge
Of the tall,old building
Let's see how they like this
I've had enough,
You can't change my mind
My inner being is forcing me
Drawing up the courage to...
Allow me to jump and never look back
The wet bricks seem to grip my feet
"Don't go!" they silently scream
"But I must!" I yell
And nobody knows what I'm speaking of
But that's okay, I say to myself,
Just as my body hits the pavement
A quick, painful death
As they gasp in utter horror
~Another Lost Soul, the angels cry~
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lilbabe
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2006-05-25 18:54:48]
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Re: A Quick, Not Quite Painless Death
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by MarLites on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:10:27 PM AEST
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I hope you would not kill yourself at all. I hope that is why you write. That is what I do then cry cry cry then go to sleep and tomorrow is another day! Good poem.
Mary |
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Re: A Quick, Not Quite Painless Death
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 06:46:54 AM AEST
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first off, same thing as the previous comment said, and would it really hurt? you would die instantly, i don't know how much pain you'd really feel....but anyway, this whole life is depressing enough without contemplating your own death. good write though.
~natalya |
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