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Xerxes
Contributed by
R0b
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Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 06:01:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Standing in the open field.
Encompassed by the spirit of the one I loved.
Staring into her eyes.
Feeling the warm sun beat down.
This is the time.
The time of internal happiness.
The time of life and love.
Peace and pleasure.
I embraced these times.
Cherished these times.
With the closing of the sun.
And the fading of that spirit.
I could feel the darkness surrounding.
The storm coming.
Now.
Standing in the valley of the shadows.
Encompassed by the unyielding gray fog.
Staring into the red saturated sky.
Feeling the warm rain fall down.
Makes me go back.
To a time.
I thought I loved.
A time I thought would never end.
A time Im glad is over...
5/25/06
R0b
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R0b
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2006-05-25 18:01:53]
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Re: Xerxes
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 06:28:50 PM AEST
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I like the flow of the verses and movement from brightness to darkness. The imagery is excellent. Nice ending too. Good write.
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Re: Xerxes
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by MarLites on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:12:41 PM AEST
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OH sorry sounds like you lost her. I can relate. Good poem
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Re: Xerxes
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 10:23:43 AM AEST
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I don't know what to really say about this poem.. except that it was good.. I mean when it comes to her and you and your "history" I hate it.. I wish that it never happened but it did.. And I can't do anything about it now except to accept your past just like you accept mine.. It is good though that you write about it because it is good to get things out.. Well anyways This was really good.. I liked it.. I love you rob and I always will..
take care
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Re: Xerxes
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 10:24:08 AM AEST
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I don't know what to really say about this poem.. except that it was good.. I mean when it comes to her and you and your "history" I hate it.. I wish that it never happened but it did.. And I can't do anything about it now except to accept your past just like you accept mine.. It is good though that you write about it because it is good to get things out.. Well anyways This was really good.. I liked it.. I love you rob and I always will..
take care
christina |
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