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Ode to the Unfeeling
Contributed by
ButchCorpuz
on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I remember…
The warmth of sunshine on a rainy day
The bliss that I felt when you came my way
The sheltered feeling that you’re here to stay
Because now…
My sun would not even shine anymore
I’m missing the bliss that I’ve longed for
Wanting to go to how things were before
If only…
I could change the weaving of destiny
Or stop the winds of change from flowing free
Then I’d be holding you right here with me
But then…
Dreams don’t really come true for everyone
Some have happy endings, while some have none
And I wake up to find my dream long gone
So now…
Only the pieces of my heart remain
Drenched in sorrow, soaked in tears, drowned in pain
Because I have loved and lost all in vain
Nevertheless…
You’re the only love I knew from the start
That even though fate tore our hearts apart
I’d still love you with what’s left of my heart
Until then…
I’d live to see each day without sunshine
And wither going against fate’s design
Loving you with this broken heart of mine
Copyright ©
ButchCorpuz
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2006-05-25 14:43:48]
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Re: Ode to the Unfeeling
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:53:54 PM AEST
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Oh Butch, this is very painful to read, I can only imagine how painful it was to write. I'm sorry things didn't work out but you know what??... You'll always have those wonderful memories to which you can hold on.
Lovely write....as always..
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Re: Ode to the Unfeeling
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by MarLites on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:17:41 PM AEST
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Oh my goodness! I just read your poem. A million times better than mine. I cried when I finished reading it. She should have seen what was rignt in front of her. Great Poem
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