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Music Of The Heart
Contributed by
Gentlemanpoet
on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 01:46:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You play your music within my heart,
the placid sounds of love.
It whispers soft across my mind,
gentle as a dove.
Your gentle eyes express to me,
the feeling that you hold.
In the light they seem to dance,
your music to unfold.
A symphony of love you play,
upon the breeze to me.
It plays so sweetly in my ear,
a lover’s melody.
When you are gone the music stops,
no gentle strings I hear.
My lonely heart cries out for you,
I need you ever near.
Like gentle harp or violin,
you play your loving strings.
You make my world a better place,
my heart for you it sings.
So play your loving music dear,
and send it all to me.
I’ll pour my love in song to you,
in loving harmony.
Copyright ©
Gentlemanpoet
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2006-05-25 13:46:11]
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Re: Music Of The Heart
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 01:49:16 PM AEST
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beautiful and sweet and flows wonderfully!
great job on this poem |
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Re: Music Of The Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:28:37 PM AEST
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| I like the way this flows and your lines are quite pleasant. Is there a reason for the repitition of the word gentle? (other than your name), perhaps some other choices, but other than that I think this is a beautiful piece! |
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Re: Music Of The Heart
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by shelby on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 03:41:33 PM AEST
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Ohhhh this is divine, a true romantic write.
Michelle |
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Re: Music Of The Heart
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 08:28:07 PM AEST
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| The rise and fall of the words was great..filled with tenderness and romance. I love it. |
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