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God's Soldier

Contributed by greysteel on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 01:05:48 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

My heart is like a rock
Cold , silent , still
It feels no pain , no joy

My head is like a sword
Knowing nothing , feeling nothing Expressing nothing
It knows what I want to do but it won't Allow me to do it

I can't control my body
I try to tell my legs to stop running
But they only go faster and faster
But oh where are they running to ?
I wish I knew , but I don't , no one does Except them

I can't control my hands
I don't know how to stop them
Will they do right or wrong ?
Only they know , cause I no longer control Them

I am now nothing
A person that can't control my body
I am now my body's slave
Will I ever break these chains ?
No , they are to big to break
Only God can break these chains
I know he will , But when ?
When will he come for me ?
Only he knows the answer
As I have told you , I know nothing but God

I feel the chains getting tighter and tighter , When will this end ?
I feel no pain but I do not want a numb body !
I know deep down I can feel the pain
But I do not show it

A person is nothing without God
God is love and pain , you may ask " How can this be ? "
But only you shall know the answer , no one Else
Can you feel the chains tightening ?

I now feel pain and hatred
Why am I feeling these things ?
Cause the devil is near
I must break these chains
He runs like the wind after me
I have found the sword of light
I cut my chains and feel love again

I slash at the devil with my sword
And down he goes on his knees
Begging for his life to be spared
Why should I spare this cowardly dog ?
He knows no love , no glory , no honor
He knows only evil
But I must take him to my captain
Cause I am God's soldier

Copyright © greysteel ... [ 2006-05-25 01:05:48]
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Re: God's Soldier (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:53:14 AM AEST
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It is a well composed poem with depth of thought provoking verse in every stanza.
friend I liked the way you used the chain as your tool of expression.
FRANCO

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