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The Pecking Order
Contributed by
twick
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Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 10:58:26 PM in AEST
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Hey stop!
hey, kid, stop!
where are you going?
can't you read?
the sign says stop!
Hey, what are you doing?
you can't do that
hey you're not supposed to keep going.
hey, Hey!
kid are you dumb or something
look, I'm doing you are favor
you'll thank me when they arrive
hey, stop fighting me
I'm just trying to help.
God*****, you ripped my shirt.
Hey, where are you going, you can't go there.
FINE! you stupid ******!
Just go your own way.
I'm following what the sign says...
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-05-24 22:58:26]
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Re: The Pecking Order
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by TwistedCage on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 05:03:54 AM AEST
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| Interesting to say the least... |
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Re: The Pecking Order
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by spencer on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 06:21:38 AM AEST
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| is this a poem about rebellion? |
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Re: The Pecking Order
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by bakacaka on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 11:56:54 AM AEST
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somehow this reminds me of my friend!
It;s really an interesting writing style
kind of like eavesdropping |
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