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Nothing Left
Contributed by
jujubee21
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Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:29:17 PM in AEST
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I close my eyes and take a breath,
It's cold inside, there's nothing left.
My pride is gone, my faith diminished,
Without a trace my soul has vanished.
Oh God please help me, I'm falling fast,
I can't take it anymore, don't make it last.
I cry till there's no more tears to shed,
Sometimes I wish that I was dead.
I'm hurting so bad, I don't understand,
God I'm still falling, there's nowhere to land.
Please forgive me for all that I've done,
Because without you I am no one.
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Re: Nothing Left
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:35:08 PM AEST
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I can't explain to you how much ur poem touched my heart. I felt ur pain and sadness through every word. I have felt like this on a number of occasions. Your heart will heal my friend in time. May God shine a special light for you and heal ur pained heart. Wishing ur days ahead are much brighter.
A deep, heartbreaking write penned so well.
*big warm hugs for u*
~*Suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Nothing Left
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 10:52:06 PM AEST
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May he lift u up above the shadows.
Great prayer and very powerfull.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Nothing Left
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by spencer on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:53:15 AM AEST
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| very good, even though i hardy ever go to church when i've got nothing left i still turn to prayer |
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Re: Nothing Left
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by texasw97 on
Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 04:57:05 PM AEST
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| Wow...You are good. I like this poem..You and I write the same way. Aw man this good. I have a couple of poems just like this one. Take care |
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