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UNLOCK YOUR HEART
Contributed by
MarLites
on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:24:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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UNLOCK YOUR HEART
I waited for you today
My heart longing for you to come
But
With each passing minute
My mind echoed the
Knowledge that you had
Chosen to stay away
Still I waited
Wishing
With a force so strong as to
Crush all the noises of
The outside world
Darkness fell
And all my hopes of being with you
Were drowned under a
Heavy curtain of tears
Maybe
Another time I will wait again
Praying
Your heart will open the
Window that is locked
Keeping my love on the outside
Then you will come to me
Copyright ©
MarLites
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2006-05-24 20:24:58]
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Re: UNLOCK YOUR HEART
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by spencer on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 08:39:34 AM AEST
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| this is a very good poem, i feel very simlar things when i'm with this girl i like. Lol as for the "Men cannot see what is right in front of them" most of us can but i get where your coming from! |
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Re: UNLOCK YOUR HEART
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 03:09:39 PM AEST
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In my experience, I see her in front
of me so well that I can see her
even with my eyes closed. Sadly, she
refused to see me...
This is a very good poem.
Keep writing! I'll keep reading.
-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope |
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Re: UNLOCK YOUR HEART
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:36:47 PM AEST
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I really like this poem but there is an underlying irony about not seeing what is right in front of you,
Den |
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Re: UNLOCK YOUR HEART
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 10:34:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, sincere and touched with the
longing voice of the heart.
Ben |
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