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i can see the truth
Contributed by
xxxklaooo
on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 04:47:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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im worried about you...
i really truley am..
i just dont want you to try again..
you said you wouldnt..
but you just seem so sad
most people dont see how your hurting inside
they just see your smile that you use to hide
but they dont see the inside
im not fooled by all of your laughing
i look at you and see what is truley happening..
i look in your eyes
and i can see
how bad you are hurting..
and how bad you need me..
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xxxklaooo
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2006-05-24 16:47:22]
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Re: i can see the truth
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by jujubee21 on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:44:23 PM AEST
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Re: i can see the truth
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by Drapes on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 10:08:41 AM AEST
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That's really good. Kind of short but that doens't matter, its still good! And I can understand it... I wrote a poem somewhat like it. Good write.
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