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My Lover, The Stranger
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
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Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:35:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love doesn’t know me anymore.
I don’t know his walls I don’t walk his floor.
Love is a stranger that comes in the night,
Stealing my shadows, leaving his light.
Love lays beside me on my unmade bed,
Upon my pillow rests his aching head.
I hear him call out into the dark,
I feel him burn me, leaving his mark,
I can hear his sobs as his tears fall,
And I can hear his silence when he says nothing at all.
Love knows my number yet he doesn’t call,
For love is a stranger, I don’t know him at all.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-05-24 15:35:50]
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Re: My Lover, The Stranger
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:48:10 PM AEST
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Very well done, and this flows great from begining to end.
Great feeling to this piece also, tho it be lonliness and desolution...well expressed! |
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Re: My Lover, The Stranger
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by MarLites on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:30:43 PM AEST
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| I can relate to your poem! Enjoyed reading it |
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Re: My Lover, The Stranger
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by globalbit on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 12:58:15 AM AEST
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| very nice poem! :-) |
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Re: My Lover, The Stranger
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by mrpeanut64 on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 01:32:25 AM AEST
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| very nice write. I know the feeling sometimes too well |
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Re: My Lover, The Stranger
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by mindset on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 05:43:48 PM AEST
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Ever searching for inside whisper life to tell nothing but a whimper.
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