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Weeping Stillframe
Contributed by
blackprayer
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Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 02:57:42 PM in AEST
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Something to this moonlit rite
echoes of a heartless fight
and in your eyes I see my fate
too bad they're filled with so much hate.
Never wanted this to be
us parting from being we
always fading in my mirror
another ghost never there.
So cliche it seems so foul
bleeding from my very soul
your like a knife that cut so deep
I said cliche and still I weep.
This maybe another day
you may decide still to stay
always seems to go astray
that I always hurt myself this way.
Copyright ©
blackprayer
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2006-05-24 14:57:42]
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Re: Weeping Stillframe
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:03:17 PM AEST
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Kinda sad .
you did good in this piece. |
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Re: Weeping Stillframe
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by ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:20:47 PM AEST
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| omg. you're more emo than i am. this poem is like a confession - i love it. |
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Re: Weeping Stillframe
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by Sordida on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 06:55:47 PM AEST
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| This is a very interesting poem. I like it. It almost reminds me of some of my older work. It's very good. Keep it up. |
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Re: Weeping Stillframe
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:14:52 PM AEST
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Retrospectively sad and knowing your history of weakness gives hope for forgiveness ...
Good work
wabl
KenMoore
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