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where? there...
Contributed by
ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon
on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 02:15:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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thousands of birds glide gracially through the air
ocean breezes racing the ocean tides
scattered breakers junp with life under the greeting from the sun
have i been there?
are you there too?
another heaven, the second kiss
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2006-05-24 14:15:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: where? there...
(User Rating: 1 ) by blackprayer on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 02:40:12 PM AEST (User
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Very unique write. I see why you posted under abstract and it does push the image to the imagination. I like the last line as well. |
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Re: where? there...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:04:52 AM AEST (User
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Short sweet and to the point, I loved this! |
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