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Who Is There?
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 12:47:58 AM in AEST
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who is there when i am down
when i'm so sad i don't make a sound
who is there when i hate my life
when i'm bleeding because of this knife
who is there when i'm alone
when i'm waiting hopelessly by this phone
who is there to guide me
when i turn to drugs to be set free
who is there to hold me close
when this pain i feel no one else knows
who is there to listen
when i'm overwhelmed with depression
who the hell is there for me
when all i can do is bleed
from what i've experienced
it's not who is there, but what is there
there only thing that is always there
is the knife that takes away my cares
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2006-05-24 00:47:58]
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Re: Who Is There?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
I HOPE YOU KNOW THAT KNIFE ISN'T YOUR FRIEND UNLESS U R USING IT TO PEEL POTATOES.
I'm so sorry u feel as tho u have no one to listen go to this site, my sisters is the pripriotor there. She will listen.
http://thethreehugs.com/
it's free and u will find many others that can relate.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Who Is There?
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:26:55 AM AEST
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| I can't really answer that question for you. I can relate to how you feel and what helps me is being the friend I waqnt others to be for me. |
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Re: Who Is There?
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by JGB on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 01:51:34 AM AEST
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WELL WRITTEN!!!
GOD IS THERE!!!!!!!!!!
lol
Joanna
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