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As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 09:12:42 PM in AEST
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As she feels, it’s not with physical touch of fingers, nor hands……
It’s the inner breath within that has been released …That remains: deep
She pauses…Yet does not hesitate
Then it all becomes a so clear as the brightness enters thee heart
It has been taken by no other like this…Is thee the “one”
Now closeting the eyes, and gasping for the one to take her
He is there, yet thee heart isn’t
It’s flowing with other simple reasons…for now thee feelings are ….lost…..
Wondering if he can take all he has, and make….Last
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 09:25:49 PM AEST
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i got a sad feeling as i read this...very, very sad.
thanks for posting this,
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 10:15:13 PM AEST
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"Thee feelings are most evident.. and so your heart bleeds unto thee"..
Thee most despairing write Ive read in a while Brew.. ..heartbreaking-
B
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by brew on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 07:28:21 AM AEST
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Just a simple analogy, of "how" usually love is presented, given and taken back. Yes, it was sad, but, just something that entered in the mind, that was being felt, from all who give until they can not....anymore.!
Brew~ |
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:11:14 AM AEST
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You have a gift for bringing raw emotion to the fore at times.
Very impressive work.
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:03:17 PM AEST
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Dayna~
You write from ur beautiful heart even though it has been pained. Your write is full of raw emotion and through ur words make ur reader feel ur pain and sadness.
Sadly the some of the best writes come from those with deep wounds. I wish you a lifetime of love, joy and happiness Dayna for you are a most deserving soul.
*big warm hugs*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 05:56:53 PM AEST
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Dayna~
So heart-tugging and forlorn. An outpouring of the heart
in only the way brew can.
Hope all is well with you, hun. Thanks for sharing . . .
*hugs*
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by halli on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 06:26:29 PM AEST
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well i hope everything is going ok hun and that the vibe i got off of this wasn't u talking but your poem. i luv ya and hope for the best for ya always. if u need me im here always remember that!
Hugs
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:15:10 PM AEST
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A true gem 2 read dayna, oh i got it's meaning lovely lovely style u have and always your meaning and words are there for
the taking. beautiful poem.
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Re: As she stands with tears streaming down cheek
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by jackson21 on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 11:45:57 AM AEST
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Wow..... is all i can seem to say! Very touching, very moving, speaks of so many things that are bombarding my mind. It grasped my emotion, all i can say that will make sence is wow!
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