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Dorothy
Contributed by
Millennium
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Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 06:54:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Dorthy, won't you tell me
if what you say is true.
I've come pretty far in life
and i don't know if i believe you.
Is there really something
beyond that rainbow afar?
Will I wake up where the clouds are far
if I wish upon a star?
Yes, bluebirds fly over the rainbow
And, yes, we should, too.
On this particular subject,
I do agree with you.
But, oh, it seems so impossible,
like it could never happen to me.
But if it does, however impossible,
I wouldn't get there with negativity.
So, tell you what, Dorothy,
I'll keep my head up high,
I'll keep dreaming, and wishing,
And maybe, like bluebirds, I'll fly.
Copyright ©
Millennium
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2006-05-23 18:54:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dorothy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shyne on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:16:01 PM AEST (User
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That's good. I like how you used the Dorothy of the Wiz in comparison to your life or life. |
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Re: Dorothy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aspiring on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:53:24 PM AEST (User
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this is good, uplifting
good write
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Re: Dorothy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Keilantra on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 07:00:59 PM AEST (User
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GREAT WRITE |
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