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His Love
Contributed by
Alison
on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 05:01:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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His love is warm,
He, with just a glance can touch my heart,
Just in his breath I hear him whisper,
"I love you"
He has sung to me the song of my soul,
Without even speaking a word,
Simply in the way he looks at me,
Making my wounds heel gently,
With his smile the world stops turning,
And time holds still in his presents.
All because of his love,
Strong,
Peaceful,
Perfect,
Patient,
Passionate,
Tender,
Sincere,
Beautiful,
Unselfish,
Everlasting,
Is his love for me,
He has captured my heart,
And held me fast,
Taken my breath away,
And freed my spirit,
Walked right into my life,
And bent down to pick me up,
He spoke of his past,
And received my future,
Took me by surprise,
And has never let me go.
Beyond tomorrow his love for me will still grow!
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-05-23 17:01:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 06:19:34 PM AEST (User
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This is absolutley a work of poetic and romantic art. A culminaton of emotions of the heart and soul . it has style dignity and most of all true conviction. in a word,
Masterpeice . . .
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Re: His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:35:43 PM AEST (User
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Real good write for a promising thing. Good luck 'n' go fer it!
wabl
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Re: His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by yackerz85 on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:50:27 PM AEST (User
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Superb. Its one of the better love poems I have read. |
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Re: His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 06:47:33 AM AEST (User
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~*Alison*~
A beautifully composed masterpiece. Such emotions poured out onto the page. A most romantic and heart warming write. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: His Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by whiteleo1984 on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 01:44:37 PM AEST (User
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This is the best work of art I have ever read, beautiful in it's context, simple, yet magnificent!!! I beleive that you have a gift and can't wait 2 hear more... |
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