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Time is...
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 04:58:52 PM in AEST
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Time stops does it not
maybe, no, I'll never let it go
Time releases what we've got
maybe, yes, but I won't confess
Time is fragile in our hands
losing this, when we kiss
Time is lost within the sands
flying far, time's not barred
Time rests upon our hilt
waking, waiting, so temptating
Time destroys the false love we built
we won't feed it, so why do we need it
Time is what it took to be
nothing but you, which is all but true
Time is the thought we'll never see
never hear, but will always fear
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Re: Time is...
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by Alison on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 05:49:05 PM AEST
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| very deep, said a lot. good write! |
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Re: Time is...
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 08:49:44 AM AEST
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I liked this. You ask questions, and leave the reader guessing, even confused, but in a good way.
Keep well
Ash |
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Re: Time is...
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by candysears on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 01:29:55 PM AEST
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Great write as always..
Time is the essence of love,life..ageing..truth..pass and future..Death...Great write..
God Bless!
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Re: Time is...
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:28:28 AM AEST
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Asking questions is a great way to keep the reader on there feet.
Great right |
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