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Almost Completely
Contributed by
Exodus
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Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 03:05:54 PM in AEST
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A thought interrupted
Like a missile launched over a vast blue sea
Exploding like an unnatural force of nature
Shaking the earth as it slammed into me
Its very strangely exciting
This moment that blew me completely away
The ocean is different, the sky is twisted
And I whisper the joy of things I'll never say
There is no time left
No time left at all
The light has burned into oblivion
Like a last curtain call
I'll never do what I said
But I'll stand with open arms
Standing on the edge of a raging conspiracy
My head ringing like 1000 fire alarms
It might be easier to swallow my fears
But then again the path would still be left lit
I am blind to all the small things
I am still here and unfit
To hold my hands over my face
There should be a constant feeling of shame
It's almost completely unbearable
I just want to forget the blame
I want to stand alone for something
Signifying the signified
Standing alone almost completely
Forgetting all the reasons found left in to confide
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Exodus
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Re: Almost Completely
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 06:45:31 PM AEST
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A very thought provoking piece. Very profound and
emotive. I feel we have all been in this place at one
time, ( quite possibly more than once ) and have
felt as you do.
It's a frightening thought, standing alone.
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Re: Almost Completely
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:16:41 AM AEST
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The use of emotions and nature are a great combo. I have to say great write.
Liam |
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