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FRIDAY NIGHT’S ALRIGHT FOR FIGHTING
Contributed by
remi
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Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 01:14:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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2/4/2006
6:30 PM
(To everyone I know)
Unopened letters to the world, suicide words and goodbye songs have wounds that won’t close
Therein lies the problem no one on this god-forsaken earth cares about my feelings including me, and that's why I don’t and that's why I did it
Cold metal key press hard against my arm red lines appear blood coming from under my skin key change to knife, anger change to stingy pain, sweaty hand trying to hold the knife straight
No thoughts in the darkness hour. Making cuts deeper into my arm , arm is red as roses.
Sweat and tears are running down my face lips are dry as sand from letting no air out
Unwanted memories and needed tears
How do you cover battle wounds of a war no one knows that you were in.
Remy
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remi
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2006-05-23 13:14:57]
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Re: FRIDAY NIGHT’S ALRIGHT FOR FIGHTING
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 02:28:09 PM AEST
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Quite a powerful write, but hang in there time has a way of not only healing but justifying the
hearts wounds. u write very well.
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Re: FRIDAY NIGHT’S ALRIGHT FOR FIGHTING
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by Spike on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 02:14:38 AM AEST
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Hi Remy,
well contructed write. The opening and closing lines were terric, full of insight, intelligence and sheer emotional frustration.
Spike |
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