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soar
Contributed by
jay89
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Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 09:44:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On the wings of an eagle,
My love for you flies.
Soaring higher and higher,
And touching the skies.
I reached up above,
And pulled a star from the sky.
To place it within,
Your precious minds eye.
To dwell there forever,
As my love for you.
On the wings of our love,
Enduring and true.
I honor you my darling,
With all that I am.
Please darling please,
Will you be my man?
There are so many things,
My heart wants to say.
I love you sweetheart,
There is no other way.
Copyright ©
jay89
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2006-05-23 09:44:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: soar
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaa0726 on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 10:22:42 AM AEST (User
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heyy awsome poem its great!! |
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Re: soar
(User Rating: 1 ) by djdarkrose04 on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 10:46:06 AM AEST (User
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Love is truly an awe-inspiring thing. I feel this poem through my marriage so well. Great job! |
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Re: soar
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 12:40:07 PM AEST (User
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I personally am a sucker fer eagles 'n' stars in the sky. You've used both nicely here to paint a sweet and tender enduring and true dwelling in your heart for your love.
Neat way to say "I love you." to your sweetheart.
wabl
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Re: soar
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 09:51:40 PM AEST (User
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simple and beautiful...i lvoe it!
wiz |
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