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The Rain
Contributed by
Jen54
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Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:59:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The rain is coming
To wash away the tears
They're falling fast
With no end in site
And I'm standing there
Hoping you wont see
Cause I couldn't bare
To have you see
The many tears you cause
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2006-05-22 21:59:16]
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Re: The Rain
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:04:01 PM AEST
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i know what that feels like ... good write
-silverheart- |
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Re: The Rain
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by Froggy on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:13:40 PM AEST
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| Good stuff...take a look at my newest poem...having a day just like yours |
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Re: The Rain
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by rphardy on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 11:25:42 PM AEST
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Rain is way over used in poems, Led Zepplein did it best in "The Rain Song"
Sorry your sad though !!! |
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Re: The Rain
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by Tiffyo4 on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 02:19:42 PM AEST
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very nice
Tiff |
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Re: The Rain
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by JGB on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 03:38:24 AM AEST
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| Thunder, and lightning, that's what I like. That washes away my tears. Fire on the mountain and lighting in the air, that's just the way it goes. Love your poem. |
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Re: The Rain
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 08:54:14 PM AEST
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| I Do Knew How You Feel |
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