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I Am Dirt
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:47:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I look up to you
towering above me
your arms raised
fingers splayed
soaking in the rays
of the sun
Feel you within me
deeper than you are tall
standing stout
reaching out
never a doubt, you’d
ever fall
Then you dance for me
with your imprisoned feet
tender toes
won’t let go
vibrate through my soul
your wind song
As you shed your dress
it falls upon my chest
I warm you
nourish too
sleep while you’re renewed
winters done
You give me your strength
security provide
full of might
oak tree like
holding tight and I …
I am dirt
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2006-05-22 21:47:32]
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Re: I Am Dirt
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:08:23 PM AEST
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i like this... good write
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Re: I Am Dirt
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 10:38:08 AM AEST
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| I don't know what to say..it's beautiful and there is nothing to critique. Has an almost Indian sound..I can hear the wind. |
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Re: I Am Dirt
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 12:58:34 PM AEST
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To alliterate my compliment of this poem: slightly sensual seduction bein' dirt. Fantastic work, Naz! It is so natural.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: I Am Dirt
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 11:07:28 PM AEST
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Nice job on this one Nazzy.
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Re: I Am Dirt
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 02:23:28 PM AEST
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Claps wildly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What a concept!!!!! and you did it perfectly!!
I am more than impressed!!
I am rocked!...hehehe |
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Re: I Am Dirt
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 02:10:30 AM AEST
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wow.
that was ...impressive.
such beautiful detail, lace trimmed and delicate...so carefully arranged, woven with depth and im sure, many interconnecting feelings..
Simply magnificent.
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Re: I Am Dirt
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 02:15:48 AM AEST
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Wriiten with great depth and maturity, another great write.
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Re: I Am Dirt
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 06:49:26 PM AEST
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Naz,
This is a beautiful write. The metaphor, that I perceive, is the tree rooted into the dirt, and from the soil the tree draws its strength and nuturing. So there is a reciprocal flow and interconnectedness.
Super write, Nazzy
Will/Terry |
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