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Dying In His Arms
Contributed by
xxxklaooo
on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 08:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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a guy, a girl
ment to be
together forever
nothing more to see
been through so much
they could outlast it all
they were destined to be
as every one could see..
so much love between the two..
as if everyone knew..
that they would last forever..
everyone was wrong..
the love is now gone
the girl is gone
they were ment to be..
forever and beyond..
and thats how it will be..
while shes dying in his arms..
Copyright ©
xxxklaooo
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2006-05-22 20:51:00]
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Re: Dying In His Arms
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:38:15 PM AEST
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heartbreaking and sad... but good write
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Re: Dying In His Arms
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by EddieDean on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:38:40 PM AEST
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Wow, strong and sad at the same time. Very powerful and moving. Nice work.
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Re: Dying In His Arms
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by holy on
Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 11:37:29 PM AEST
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Good job.
Maybe they will be destined never to meet again, but they gave each other a eternal memory, and the experiences are branded on their memory. Be sure, many people promised to their lover to be faithful forever when they were falling in love...... |
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