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Memories
Contributed by
candysears
on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 08:00:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Over wades of the tides
Rushing on the edge of
The sandy shore;
Lines of your face seem
To form with the mist of
The tidal wave rush,
Precious memories seem
To capture each thought
The very scent of you
Stored away,
Preserve and store to never
Be forgotten
Your eyes seem to hold me
Dearly within your mind
Heart and soul
As you fade into the
Salty mist from the sea
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2006-05-22 20:00:25]
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Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 08:37:53 PM AEST
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a great read! i like this alot, you've done well tying your love into the sea analogy...nice job.
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Re: Memories
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by EddieDean on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:42:54 PM AEST
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I agree with Wiz, this is a really beautful write and I can see the see it unfolding in my mind. Very nice work.
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Re: Memories
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by LavenderFeathers on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 08:22:14 PM AEST
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| I like how the poem flows effortlessly. I agree with the previous user about the analogy between the love and the sea. Well done! |
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