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The Man In Black

Contributed by punkhead13 on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 05:59:44 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

I'm gonna catch a train
and see where it goes
I'll be gone for now
I have lies to expose.
I'm gonna catch a train
don't expect me to call
if I choke, or if I trip
don't expect me to fall

True story True story
but you'll never really know
what happened that night
is it me I really show
I'll see you in the dark
I'm allergic to the light
I might just go albino
I might just loose my sight.

What happened that night
was nothing rare at all
but maybe it was
it's hard to recall
it's a minor disability
it can mess with your mind
fixed with simple therapy
if not, you'll be confined

True story True story
but you'll never really know
what happened that night
is it me I really show
I'll see you in the dark
I'm allergic to the light
I might just go albino
I might just loose my sight.

on that train, i met a man
he changed it all for me
he talked of this plan
that would make everyone see
there's more to good and evil
than what meets the eye
not a simple thing at all
not something you'll defy

Copyright © punkhead13 ... [ 2006-05-22 17:59:44]
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Re: The Man In Black (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:50:27 PM AEST
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Abstract work indeed, but a very good and telling poem. Keep up the good work.

-Eddie Dean

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