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Footies at the Pier
Contributed by
Mystik
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Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 01:59:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sundown beneath starlight
Sitting two, at ocean's front
Trickling wine warms as it rolls
The chocolate has been devoured
The sun has sank below waters edge
Playing footsies in blackness.....
.......at the pier's ledge.
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2006-05-22 13:59:18]
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Re: Footies at the Pier
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by MarLites on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 02:24:03 PM AEST
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| Cute Captures the moment! |
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Re: Footies at the Pier
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 03:55:31 PM AEST
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Very nice image of sunset on the ocean. When a poem makes me feel something, I consider it a success. I saw the sun sinking and felt the sand in my toes. I could taste chocolate and would like some more wine please :-) Good economy of words which capture a precious moment in time.
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Re: Footies at the Pier
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by The_Young_Poet on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 03:58:55 PM AEST
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| awww sweet. Nice Piece |
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Re: Footies at the Pier
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 05:53:08 PM AEST
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Very Romantic, sounds like a dream date !!!
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