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The Silent Kiss
Contributed by
drillseargent
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The unstinted waters ripple in the creek nearby.
Downhill they flow like tears,emptying into the stream of love.
A blanket of fog escapes,only to blind me,for
what seems like an eternity.
Not only from sight,but from emotions that cannot come to life.
The haunting of the stillness is quiet in my mind.
Fire burning inside,Flames flickering.
Like those of a firefly in the darkness.
Never to be captured,only growing dimmer.
The tranquility of the night is as that of death.
Peaceful and serene.
Your voice echoes from the valley, as the mountains bow their heads.
The reverberation of your breath I do hear.
Theclouds begin to hover over me.
Passion,Oh passion,how long dos't though lie dormant?
For now, or forever?
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drillseargent
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2003-02-06 15:40:00]
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Re: The Silent Kiss
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 07:09:16 PM AEST
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| I can't believe you call yourself drillseargent - you write so beautifully with such wonderful feeling and passion. Love this. |
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Re: The Silent Kiss
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:43:26 PM AEST
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This was so surprising! I didnt see this coming! Great peice! So beautiful in your eyes!
Christina |
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Re: The Silent Kiss
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:58:00 PM AEST
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| lovely............. |
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Re: The Silent Kiss
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by riverofwords on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:09:05 AM AEST
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love your writing style ..very symbolic and
a beautiful write
peace be your journey
Terry |
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