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Fleeting Moment
Contributed by
Gentlemanpoet
on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:15:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lace upon a gown of white,
flowing in the breeze.
Her lips are moist like dew on a rose,
with fragrance there to tease.
Skin of white like silk to touch,
like a cooing dove when she sighs.
With fleeting glance I see her face,
and hear her pleading cries.
Angels breath upon her hair,
that reaches to her waist.
Upon my cheek she leaves a kiss,
my lips have longed to taste.
Like precious gems her mystical eyes,
pierce into my soul.
This empty vessel longs for thee,
please come and make me whole.
A whisper and a touch, an illusive dream,
like a glimmer in the night.
For a moment in time, two hearts caressed,
but then she takes her flight.
Copyright ©
Gentlemanpoet
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2006-05-22 06:15:26]
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Re: Fleeting Moment
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:25:38 AM AEST
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| Great write,feel free 2 check out some of my poems. |
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Re: Fleeting Moment
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by Sordida on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:30:24 AM AEST
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| This is a very sweet poem. I know that almost any girl would love to have a guy write something like this about her. It's very beautiful. |
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Re: Fleeting Moment
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 07:49:05 AM AEST
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| Very well written romantic write....Mike |
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Re: Fleeting Moment
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by Davinah on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:07:50 AM AEST
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| This is very, very beautiful... |
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Re: Fleeting Moment
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:50:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful write about the illusive maiden who inhabits our dreams. Excellent construction in rhyme and meter.
Butch |
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