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The Deep
Contributed by
Alineko
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Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 12:58:19 AM in AEST
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The end is near
for those who hear
the rumbling in the deep
A thousand screams
awaken dreams
slumbering in the deep
We expose our souls
to the crumbling coals
smoldering in the deep
The fires alight
what we hide
in our eyes
peering in the deep
Copyright ©
Alineko
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2006-05-22 00:58:19]
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Re: The Deep
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by JGB on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 01:12:56 AM AEST
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I hear you! Not sure what I hear, but I hear it!
LOL!
Joanna |
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Re: The Deep
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 01:50:10 AM AEST
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This is very interesting. Could have many meanings that what i like about it. You left it open to the reader. Excellent job here.
~Lo |
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Re: The Deep
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by Davinah on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 01:57:04 AM AEST
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| Very well done! |
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