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When i leave
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 05:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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My moment in time has come to be gone
Holding me supportive
The kindle of bringing you with me
Don’t force my hand to let go
Envisioning my way out
Vanishing method of felicitous life
The interlace combination with family
Including no blockade of friends
Not to verify, but I have love for all of you
Equally with none of a value set
Making up of ones mind
To remain or to disappear and perish
A tug of war battle to heed
The conjointly mix between my decisions
Accepting is challenging
The farewell bon voyage
When I departure
Who knows if I go
will I come back
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Re: When i leave
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by shelby on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 03:34:34 AM AEST
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A powerful write, it seems as though your trying to make up your mind should I stay should I go and maybe wondering who would miss you once you left. I think when I depart is what you meant?? Anyway, good write.
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Re: When i leave
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by The_Young_Poet on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 12:27:44 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Well written. You expressed it well. |
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