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An Empty Room
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
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Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 05:24:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The room in which we loved,
Is now locked and filled with dust,
The bed still crumpled from when last we lay,
I closed the door the very next day.
No air or light has pierced that room,
It’s cobwebbed now, filled with gloom,
That room heard every dream I had
It saw each smile and heard each laugh.
And when he left he left me raw,
So I left that room and locked it’s door,
I confined my pain to within it’s walls,
Years on, I still hear it’s calls,
It beckons me to the unmade bed,
The pillow upon which he placed his head,
And when I hear it my tears fall,
For it is him I hear call,
I hear it as clear as anything said,
The forlorn voice of the still loved dead.
T Shannon C2006
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-05-21 17:24:42]
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Re: An Empty Room
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by guiltycircles on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 06:31:59 PM AEST
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| this was beautiful and heart-wrenching...great expression of the ones left behind |
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Re: An Empty Room
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by wizard on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 09:58:44 PM AEST
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a very sad and touching peice...my heart goes out to you.
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Re: An Empty Room
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 11:42:11 PM AEST
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Such sadness. I have known this and it is the hardest thing
to shake. But take comfort in the thought that is gets easier with
every passing day. Writing helps too, and you've expressed
your sadness expertly. Excellent post!
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Re: An Empty Room
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 02:26:11 AM AEST
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I am sorry for your loss. this is a beautiful piece though. Very nicely done....my heart goes out to you.
~Lo |
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Re: An Empty Room
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by BrokenXbyManyX on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 09:00:14 PM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot. It wasn't very uplifting but it was well expressed. I can only imagine what you are goin thru (if it's you). I'm here if you wanna talk.
Lovely poem.
Lauren |
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Re: An Empty Room
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 11:09:31 AM AEST
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~:*beautiful*:~
even in your pain you have written an exquisite masterpiece, this is so heartbreaking for me,
love n' hugs nessa
roses roses roses |
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